Freaked Out!

I love this kind of shit! When I get excited, can’t help myself, I am excited.

Good mastery of the writing form, a short vignette, no distracting parenthesis, believable metaphor, good word choices, etc. I note the names of the characters are metaphors and I could only get one of them; Luthor. I lost the identity of a character for a few sentences. No problem. I will read again. Still enjoyed it. Hat tip to diarist AgentONeal.

Opening paragraph:
From the gaseous bowels of the deepest swamp arises the grim visage of the Legion of Doom headquarters! Into the night sky it climbs, lit only by the moon, and the eerie, ever-present glow of pure, unadulterated evil.
Meanwhile, at the Hall of Doom...
by AgentONeal
Sat Jul 05, 2008 at 09:11:49 PM PDT
http://www.dailykos.com/storyonly/2008/7/6/01149/83900/976/547181Opening
As always,
BB
P.S. I’m reading Mosley’s latest right now and what a contrast in reading materials this evening. (AM?). Looking forward to more of AgentONeal and hoping my neighbors do not get too concerned about me making so much noise. (Smile)